I posted my first add (based off a fine arts add) a few weeks ago and after my class critique, we decided that the concept wasn't translating into the visual (the car executed in half cubist). Instead, I created a dynamic image of the car bursting through the painting... i hesitated with this image because i didn't want it to be breaking the art... but rather born from it and continuing its legacy. I like the visual result, but im still questioning wether it looks as though the BMW is better than the painting... I reworked the copy so that it is more specific to the art work - ex: cubist= mastered geometry, futurist = mastered movement (and speed, and mechanism), and jackson pollack/ american modern art = innovation


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